Comments for E V E R M I S T http://atfmb.com/Evermist A Tale of The New Universe Fri, 23 Jul 2010 04:53:23 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 Comment on Chapter Thirty-Six by Patrick Hester http://atfmb.com/Evermist/2010/07/chapter-thirty-six/comment-page-1/#comment-276 Patrick Hester Fri, 23 Jul 2010 04:53:23 +0000 http://atfmb.com/Evermist/?p=327#comment-276 Getting good, isn't it? :D ~P Getting good, isn’t it? :D

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]]> Comment on Chapter Thirty-Four by Patrick Hester http://atfmb.com/Evermist/2010/07/chapter-thirty-four/comment-page-1/#comment-275 Patrick Hester Fri, 23 Jul 2010 04:52:28 +0000 http://atfmb.com/Evermist/?p=272#comment-275 Thanks :) ~P Thanks :)

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]]> Comment on Chapter Thirty-Six by Clifton Hill http://atfmb.com/Evermist/2010/07/chapter-thirty-six/comment-page-1/#comment-274 Clifton Hill Thu, 22 Jul 2010 22:28:04 +0000 http://atfmb.com/Evermist/?p=327#comment-274 Me want more EVERMIST! Me want more EVERMIST!

]]> Comment on Chapter Thirty-Four by Clifton Hill http://atfmb.com/Evermist/2010/07/chapter-thirty-four/comment-page-1/#comment-272 Clifton Hill Thu, 22 Jul 2010 18:48:26 +0000 http://atfmb.com/Evermist/?p=272#comment-272 Very interesting. Your story is truly evolving here. I like it. Though the early chapters were good, they are nothing in comparison to how it has begun to shape up. Keep up the good work. I look forward to more. Very interesting. Your story is truly evolving here. I like it. Though the early chapters were good, they are nothing in comparison to how it has begun to shape up. Keep up the good work. I look forward to more.

]]> Comment on Chapter Thirty by Clifton Hill http://atfmb.com/Evermist/2010/04/chapter-thirty/comment-page-1/#comment-271 Clifton Hill Wed, 21 Jul 2010 18:05:48 +0000 http://atfmb.com/Evermist/?p=250#comment-271 Ok. Yep. That was good... *salivating for more* Love the engineers, and even the portrayal in text of how they speak. Nice. Ok. Yep. That was good… *salivating for more*

Love the engineers, and even the portrayal in text of how they speak. Nice.

]]> Comment on Chapter Twenty-Nine by Clifton Hill http://atfmb.com/Evermist/2010/04/chapter-twenty-nine/comment-page-1/#comment-269 Clifton Hill Tue, 20 Jul 2010 22:51:03 +0000 http://atfmb.com/Evermist/?p=248#comment-269 Found a little error above. Jacyn has already ridden off to the keep, but you note he replies to Eli. I think this chunk was supposed to be cut: “I heard about the cats,” Elias said slowly. Jaycn nodded. “Big ones. Take a horse right out from under you and drag it over the wall with you still in the stirrups. Ever heard a horse scream?” Elias shuddered. “No.” “You will. In a full attack, I’ve seen vines come whipping out of the mist, drag a man off or pierce him through. Branches too. Those deaths are immediate. Trees don’t need fresh meat.” Found a little error above. Jacyn has already ridden off to the keep, but you note he replies to Eli. I think this chunk was supposed to be cut:

“I heard about the cats,” Elias said slowly.

Jaycn nodded. “Big ones. Take a horse right out from under you and drag it over the wall with you still in the stirrups. Ever heard a horse scream?”

Elias shuddered. “No.”

“You will. In a full attack, I’ve seen vines come whipping out of the mist, drag a man off or pierce him through. Branches too. Those deaths are immediate. Trees don’t need fresh meat.”

]]> Comment on Chapter One by Patrick Hester http://atfmb.com/Evermist/2009/10/chapter-one/comment-page-1/#comment-171 Patrick Hester Thu, 03 Jun 2010 00:21:56 +0000 http://atfmb.com/Evermist/?p=14#comment-171 I'm glad you like it :) ~P I’m glad you like it :)

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]]> Comment on Chapter One by Miladysa http://atfmb.com/Evermist/2009/10/chapter-one/comment-page-1/#comment-170 Miladysa Wed, 02 Jun 2010 22:39:38 +0000 http://atfmb.com/Evermist/?p=14#comment-170 Oh! I LOVE well written characters! An excellent start :) Oh! I LOVE well written characters! An excellent start :)

]]> Comment on Chapter Twenty-Eight by Patrick Hester http://atfmb.com/Evermist/2010/04/chapter-twenty-eight/comment-page-1/#comment-158 Patrick Hester Sat, 22 May 2010 03:43:01 +0000 http://atfmb.com/Evermist/?p=246#comment-158 ...wait til you get to Ch 30. All the everything hits the fan. ~P …wait til you get to Ch 30. All the everything hits the fan.

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]]> Comment on Chapter Twenty-Eight by Clifton Hill http://atfmb.com/Evermist/2010/04/chapter-twenty-eight/comment-page-1/#comment-157 Clifton Hill Fri, 21 May 2010 23:32:55 +0000 http://atfmb.com/Evermist/?p=246#comment-157 'Kaff' huh. You should have called it Dew and described it as sweet and light green. ;-) An homage to your own invigorating drink of choice. ‘Kaff’ huh. You should have called it Dew and described it as sweet and light green. ;-) An homage to your own invigorating drink of choice.

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